What do you think of my story so far?

it's really good! It makes me want to know more about why her parents are so unhappy with her being with Cooper. and trust me I would've loved to write something like that when i was 13 all mine ended up getting deleted off my computer and completly forgotten about. loved it though (but im 14 now and i sorda opened up more when i started co writing things with my friends) lol :DD